Feedback

From the spreads developed feedback was given. It was suggested that the general aesthetic of the design was strong, although some spreads needed alterations.

Firstly, it was stated that the 'members' page was very crowded, with the large typography feeling somewhat overpowering and not complying to that of the other spreads. It was also suggested that some of the words were larger than others. 

Other comments made were generally about the 'rules' of graphic design. For example the line length in some paragraphs needed to be shortened, in order to apply to Vignelli's cannon.